Hope you are doing well! Welcome to our fifth activity. Please, post your comments before May 5th, 10 a.m.!
1. Think about someone you admire the most.
2. Make a brainstorming to get some ideas for writing.
3. Write 4 paragraphs considering the suggested format (introduction, main idea, supporting ideas and conclusion). It must have 150 words at least.
4. Language use / writing aspects:
- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide.
- Useful vocabulary you need to express your ideas.
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
SOMEONE I ADMIRE…
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my mom. Her name is Victoria. She is forty-eight years old. She has got short black hair and small eyes. She is neither fat nor thin and medium height. She is a solidary, honest, fighter and responsible person. She works at "Nature’s Sunshine Products of Colombia" Company in Tunja. She lives with my dad, sisters and me.
She is a beautiful woman and excellent worker. Her job is not easy. She calls to customers for offering the products of the company. It is very difficult persuade to people for buying them because these products are very expensive, but she tries and tries until people sell them. Also, in this job she tolerates people's feelings and behaviorisms.
She is the best mother in the world because she always gives advices, helps people with their troubles and tries to find out solutions to them . Also, I admire her because, with little money she manages to put clean clothes on me, my sisters and my dad. She works strongly for getting some food. She does not care the money, She prefer to enjoy and to share with her family and friends than having money.
My mom teaches me a woman’s mind should be the most beautiful part of her. I love her for all the times she picks me up when I am down. All that I am or hope to be, I owe to my parents, especially to my mom. I love my mom with all my heart. She is my life.
Someone, I admire is my sister Rocio.
ReplyDeleteShe is ten years older than me. So she is thirty now, she lives with me. She is very tender and she is my confident. She is medium height, black hair, brown eyes and slim.
She has three children, she is very lovely with them. She has been studying public accounting since she was twenty – six year old. She wants to be a good professional, she wants to do a master program. She likes to write stories since she was a child. Likewise, she enjoys it. I hope she can write a book with her fantastic stories.
She does not have free time because all the time she is working in a pet shop. Moreover she studies very hard all nights at the UPTC. In addition, she is very careful with her children, she is a very busy woman. I consider that she is a hard working person.
Sometimes, she has free time, we go to the cinema with her children. I love her, I like her personality. In special, I admire her wishes to continue learning.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my friend Leidy. She is a year younger than me, so she is 22 now, and she lives in Bogotá. She is very kind and responsible, and she is my confident. She has short and brown hair, also she has brown eyes. She is short and very thin. And she has three siblings, two sisters and one brother.
She has been studying English during six years. She started to study English in an Academy; there she studied for two years. Then, she finished this course, and she decided to continue studying English in the University, so she is in 7th semester.
I met her when she was studying in the Academy, because I studied there too, and we were in the same group. We began to spend time, and we used to study together for learning more things in English. Although at the time she wanted to study engineering, but she felt like the English and she changed her opinion.
Leidy is studying and working at the same time. She is working in a call center after University. She works Monday to Saturday. I think that she is very responsible, because she gets good notes and she works very hard.
Erika Rozo
Someone, I admire is the UFC fighter Phil Brooks, also known as CM Punk. He is seventeen years older than me, so he is thirtysix now. He lives in Chicago, Illinois with his wife April Lee. He is high height, black hair, brown eyes and thin.
ReplyDeleteHe was a wrestler in the WWE since he was 24 years old, but he quits the company due health problems, he is part of the straigth edge society, because he doesn't like the alcohol neither the drugs, this beacuse of his father was an alcoholic. he trains every day to be the best figther in the world, he is very responsable with his job.
Phil is very busy because he always traveling around USA. In the WWE he always gave great shows, he was very unpredictable, also I admire him because he never afraid to tell the truth, he doesn't care what people think of him.
I'm waiting for the day that he returns to fighting in the wwe company, because in truth he is the best in the world since day one.
Someone I admire is my girlfriend, her name is Stefanny, she’s a year younger tan me, she lives in Duitama, we have four years together, she’s very beautiful, confident, lovely and smart, she has got long, curly and black hair and brown eyes, she’s medium height and slim.
ReplyDeleteWe have got a son, his name is Santiago and I admire her because she’s responsible of the breeding of our son and I know that is a difficult job. Santiago is ten months old, and is a very unquiet child, so she must be pending of him everytime, also, she is responsible for the house and the Santiago’s medical dates.
When our son have got a medical date , the doctors always say Santiago That is a healthy and smart baby , And They congratulate to my girlfriend for That , Also she cooks very delicious and is very patience With Santiago and me . I love play with she and with my son because we are young and crazies and we have fun a lot.
In conclusion I have got the best woman in the world and I love her a lot.
“Go Rigo Go”
ReplyDeleteThere is a person that I admire for his life. He is Rigoberto Urán. Rigo is 27 years old and he is a cyclist; when he is in Colombia, he lives in Medellín, but when he travels to Europe, he lives in Madrid. For me he is a good person, because he is very close with people around him.
On the other hand, he has got long and black hair; also, he is thin because of his profession. For his goals and results, I think that he loves being a cyclist, so he is a winner, because he has got positive mind all time.
Also, he trains daily and he has competed for important teams, and he competed in “Giro de Italia, Vuelta a España and Tour de Francia”. In this year, he wants to win an important competition like “Giro de Italia”.
Rigoberto, also is a businessman, because He has a cycling store, so He is the administrator. For that reason Rigo does not a lot of free time. When he arrived to Colombia, he shares with his family and with cyclist fans. For his profession, Rigo has traveled around the world, for this reason, he speaks some languages like English, Italian, and he speaks a little bit of French. Finally, for me, Rigo is a great cyclist and person, so he will win many prizes in his career.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE…
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my father. He is 43 years old. He lives in villapinzón with my mother and my siblings. My father is very nice sweet, He is my confident. He has black hair, He is tall and thin and he has the green eyes.
My father is a teacher in a school of my town. He is always in a good mood. He likes to work with children but, He says that it is a very difficult profession because it takes a long time. However, my father is very happy.
My father is very busy because He also is a musician. On weekends, He goes to different places with his musical group. He plays the guitar, the piano, and also my father is the singer of the group. Also my father composes songs in his free time. He records the songs in a small studio of his house.
Sometimes, my father rehearses in the evenings with his musical group “Ajì Carranga” in this group my brother takes part also. He plays the piano and the requinto. My father my siblings and I have a choir. We only sing songs to god on weekends in the church.
Carlos is a teacher, a musician, a singer, a leader, and an excellent father, currently my father is doing the master program. In the future my father is going to finish the master program, since he wants to be a better teacher every day. Moreover, He wants to record a complete CD with his own songs and his musical group “Ají Carranga”.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my aunt María. She is 46 years old and she lives in Susacón, Boyacá. She is tall and she has black and short hair. She is lovely and happy. She is extroverted and she loves going to parties. Her favorite kind of music is Vallenato. Besides, she is a very hard-working woman.
My aunt is a warrior, she is a single mother. She has a daughter who is 15 years old. Her name is Lorena and she is the most important person in her life. She and her daughter have lived alone for several years since my grandparents died. This was really hard for them, but they needed to get ahead.
María has worked from an early age, but when Lorena was born, she had to work very hard to give the best to her. Time passed and when Lorena was 6 years, she became ill. She had a surgery because her heart was not working properly. Fortunately, the operation was successful. A few years later, my aunt was diagnosed with cancer. Since then, she has had more than one job at the same time to have enough money for her treatment and for the welfare of her daughter.
I admire my aunt because she is a brave woman who in spite of all the problems, she never gave up. She is very optimistic and persevering. She always has a smile on her face and she enjoys helping other people.
SOMEONE TO ADMIRE EACH DAY
ReplyDeleteA person who really I admire is my father, Joaquín. He’s a veterinarian, and he puts all of his heart on his profession. He looks like me, he has brown eyes and black hair, but He is smaller than me.
He’s been a veterinarian since before I came to this world, approximately twenty years; he has attended many different cases of different animals and has saved lots of lives, like a hero, right? Now, I work with him when I have free time, and I have seen that He’s very well-known by his way to work, because he’s more practical than theorical and he makes everything as possible when he has a critical case. Also, he hates that people give a bad care to the animals, he makes that people recognize their mistakes and try to make a better job with their animals.
My father sometimes hasn’t free time, because an animal can be ill in a few minutes, and he has to go instantly, even if it’s raining or is at night, but he is always with us, his family, he’s really funny and he isn’t complicated, he appreciate the little things of the life, but always want to be better.
He is of that kind of people who always find the answer to anything, like a typical Colombian person, or make everything searching it, I think that He always will make all as possible to make us happy, and it can be that we don´t live with all of that society think that makes a family happy, but we have to him and it is more than all of we can ask.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteSomeone i admire is my mother, her name is Francelina Duarte, she lives in Aquitania with my father, She is the most important person in my life, and is very friendly with all people, she is the most beautiful and intelligent person I've met in my life, has beautiful light brown eyes, smooth and long hair, it is a very loving person with children.
She has been working in a children's garden for more than fifteen years, so that worked really hard thinking on welfare and healthy growth of children, giving them all their love and wisdom, as he did with me, she gave me the best of life: a beautiful family, taught me respect, honesty, solidarity, camaraderie, and thanks to her I am who I am, a good person.
She is a very busy person, when not working, is reading or doing other obligations of the house, In his spare time he enjoys listening to classical music, rancheras and ballads, many people want her for their great charisma and kind personality, and for his leadership.
It is the person who most love and admire, and I hope someday to be like her, a person full of kindness and affection towards others, humble and with a beautiful heart.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my mother Mary. She is married with my father Ricardo, they have three children; she is 28 years older than me, she is all for me, she has blond and curly hair. Her eyes are beautiful; they are like honey are beady eyes. She is medium height, slim and very fit because she likes to do sport.
She has been the best of my life, she gives me love and all what I need. She is very strict but, I think that she is of that way because she wants the best for me, although it should be for her job. She is a coordinator and has to be strict because she is an example for her students.
My mother is very busy because she is at the work every day from the morning to the night. She is a really good coordinator and has taught all her life. Her job is considered one of the best in Granada. All the people say that she is special, and respectful, I think that her job makes her wants the best for her family, students and all the people.
My mother doesn´t have a lot of free time and she is ending another career because she loves to study and it is important for all the family to support her, she is our happiness, she is independent and she wants to be increasingly better. I love my mother and I know that she loves me.
Someone I admire is my brother Jonathan. Eight years older than me, so he is 29 now and he lives in Bogotá. He is very smart and friendly and he is brown hair and brown eyes. He is tall, slim and very strong because he practices tennis at weekends and during week he works.
ReplyDeleteHe has been working since five years in the Republic Bank of Colombia, he is very happy for being in that place because he is in his favorite area, I am talking about research. He must do papers about economic aspects and he seems to be comfortable with it, actually he enjoys it!
Jonathan is very busy because he also studies a Master of Business Administration (MBA). He is studying at abroad university, however he does not attend the lessons in person class, he studies in a different way what means distance learning. He tells that he has learnt about market research, viability analysis, cost analysis etc.
Jonathan and me going to join us, and I am very excited for knowing about him, about his job and his wife and I am sure that we going to have a great time together because he always has something amazing for telling me. For me… he is a role model.
Someone I admire
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my dear friend Andrea. She was 19 years old and lived in Tunja. She was very friendly, beautiful and funny. She had big dark eyes and was medium height but infortunately she had cancer.
Although the sickness, when she received that notice, she graduated of high school, then she began to study in the SENA and to work in a small center. She loved doing those activities. However, she had to graduate from SENA this year. She enjoyed to pass her time with her family and friends.
She had fought for doing her dreams until the end, nothing was important to continue studying and working. She was optimist when talked about the life without excuses, she was an example of life.
Andrea was a wonderful woman for her form of look the life than nobody has not looked. She always will be my best friend. I love her.
Someone I admire.
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my father. He’s name is José del Carmen Ochoa, but he’s called Carmelo. He´s 64 years old and he lives in Paipa, where he is a Doctor. He´s tall, have short, black hair and blue eyes, he´s a chubby guy very kind and devote to help others.
What I most admire is that first he studied a degree in Biology and Chemistry, and he become a Teacher. Then he got married and had my two older sisters. But he always wanted to be a Doctor, so he works as a teacher and studied medicine.
My dad is very busy, sometimes he also works at night at the clinic, and he gives some of his free time to lectures Eteenagers and young adults about sexually transmitted diseases and how to prevent an early pregnancy.
I now that my dad works very hard to give us a great and happy life. I’m very grateful for he’s love. He’s my role model and I want to be as successful, helpful and kind as he is.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE.
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is my mother. Her name is Alicia. She is 52 years old. She lives in San Miguel de Sema. She is very lovely with me and my sisters. My mother is our confident at home. She has got long dark black hair and small brown eyes. She is medium height.
My mother was the oldest sister and she always worked very hard because her mother does not had money for her and her siblings for that reason she began to work since she was 12 years old. She could not finish the high school because she not was supported by her parents. She wanted to be a teacher.
Now I am very happy that I am fulfilling her dream. She always tells me this proud of my. My mother has a coffee shop in our own house. My sister and I always help to her in the store when we are not studying. She likes to sing and she love to play with all the family to basketball and board games, we enjoy and we laugh lot. She is very happy. She always encouraged me when I am sad and every weekend she greets me with a big smile.
For me my mother is the best mother in the world because her job required of lot time and however she always has time to listen and advice. My mother wants to continue to grow her coffee shop and it is become the biggest and best in my town and so she can give to me and my sisters more opportunities. She is always thinking of ways to help the people who she wants and for that reason I love her and is the person whom I admire.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteThe person who i really admire is my mother, her name is Gloria Gómez ,she is fourty years old she lives in Malaga_santander with my father, and my brother She is the most important person in my life, beacuse she is very friendly with all people, specially with her familia. she is so beautifu,i love her personality, she is my confident, my friend. She is médium, blue eyes, and black hair .
She is a kind person, all her live , she has been working in her family home. She has been all for me and for my family, because she is always pending of all like our education, health, she ever there for me when i need her. I think that she always seems to know what is wrong and how to take care of it.
My mom is like my super hero. She can do a lot of things and still put up with my siblings and me. Sometimes my mom and I fight, but I know she will always be there for me no matter what happens. Sometimes I think of my mom as my best friend because I know I can talk to her about anything, and she will understand me when I don’t make sense. I think my mom is the greatest mom in the world and one of the most loving and caring people in the world.
In conclusion, I admire my mother because she teaches me about life experience and she takes care of me before she can take care of her. My mother works so hard for our family and for my best. I love my mom a lot. And that is why I look up to my mom.
SOMEONE I ADMIRE
ReplyDeleteSomeone I admire is Emiliano Suárez, my godfather. He’s 57 years old, he is an actor and he lives in Paris, France. He is a handsome man, he is a kind person. He has got black hair with some white hair, brown eyes and medium height.
He is a very worker person, he started to study engineering oil but inside the university he had to choose another subject, so he decided theatre. He started to test more theatre than mathematics in his career. For this reason he studied in National School of Dramatic Art of Bogotá, then he worked with a Candelaria’s group and after a while he worked in Spain. He arrived to France thanks to a scholarship. There in France he continued studying theatre and he met a woman who nowadays is his wife who has seven children.
Usually, Emiliano has not time for his family, he constantly travel to different countries making plays for diverse crowd, however he always keeps an eye on his family. He used to come to Colombia for Iberoamerican Theater Festival of Bogotá where he acted in different plays.
Emiliano loves Colombia and hopes to come back soon. I think he is a persistent and worker person. Before reasons and his path like professional, like excellent father and husband, he is the person I admire.
Hi, everybody.
ReplyDeleteIm going to write about My mother
When ask me about who do you admire? Only I can think in one person, my mom. For me is the most importan person in my life. I havent got a father, I never have know to him but I think that in this moment this situation, its not important for me, I have lived quietly for many time and simply I dont worry for that.
Then, why my mom is the person most important for me? Because, she is a wonderful woman, she always has been pentient of me and my siblings since only, we were children. Always she has been worry, she has been careful for us, all days, all time without to ask something. As a mother as amazing that care her children. But my mom is special, I think that she is unique, so she is a hard-working and only give us. Sometimes, we said her that she should give something to her.
Also, I admire to my mom because, she always working in her job and also in the house, for example, doing clean here, overthere; cooking us, in fact she cooks very well and very delicious. When she cooks us, we often ask her more because the meal that she cooked, we love it. So, its a way of say her thanks, althougth I think that anything is sufficient to thank all things that she is doing for me and my family.
For all things and other things that I cant say because this things are things that only I understand, because are little details that Only I can feel and estimate. So, my mother is the most important person in my life.
Thanks.
Someone i admire.
ReplyDeleteHi i´m going to talk about Adam Levine.
Someone i admire is Adam levine. He is 36 years old. He lives in the United States of America. He is happy and persevering. He has a short hair, his color hair is Brown, his eyes are blue. He is a tall person and also he is thin. He has tatoos. He is a Singer and a dancer.
In the beginning He knew to Jesse Carmichael, he played clarinet in Regis High School Orchestra became, as he played in the French Woods Festival of the Performing Arts. Then they were great friends and appearance together, Levine, Carmichael and a new member his name was Madden only played songs from their favorite bands these were Pearl Jam and Alice in Chains.
Adam Levine also works as a soloist, he has collaborated with several artists of the music scene. In 2005, he played together with Ying Yang Twins song "Live Again" and later with Kanye West, played on the single "Heard 'Em Say" album Late Registration.
Adam is going to appear in the American Horror Story series and along with actress Jenna Dewan perform "The Lovers". He also will to debut with the film Can a Song Save Your Life in which he will act as the boyfriend of Keira Knightley.
He join the cast of the second season of American Horror Story, called American Horror Story: Asylum, playing the character of Leo.
I love him! I love his music!
Thank you!
Someone I admire.
ReplyDeleteThat's very easy. His name is Luis Antonio Guío Valbuena. He is my father. He is forty seven(47) years old, tall, dark-skinned, black hair but with a little gray now. :D. I admire him because since childhood has taught me the values that I needed, gave me unconditional love. I never had too much but thankfully never lacked for anything.
He's always been a hardworking man, dedicated to his home, he is conductor, he gets up very early every day to do their jobs, and to give us good life to my two brothers, my mother and me.
Although it has the appearance of serious man, everyone who knows him realizes the great man who is so beautiful and the feelings he has.
In conclusion I have the best dad in the world, and I thank God and life, because he is alive, and I can, to spend moments of happiness at his side.
Thank you.