Friday, 8 May 2015

Creative writing challenge!

Hi all!  

Hope you are doing well! Welcome to our sixth activity. Please, post your comments before May 18th, 6 p.m.!


1. Go to the web link 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEukS2YN9B8 and watch the video (it was worked some classes ago).

2. Write your own version of the story. Try to use a short tale's writing structure: introduction, body and conclusion.

- Introduction: it usually offers something that changes / affects / motivates the characters of the story to overcome a situation.

- Body: it usually reveals how the characters move toward overcoming the situation.

- Conclusion: it has to do with facing one difficult choice and decides one correct option while working out of the situation.


3. Write a paragraph for each one of the parts mentioned above, giving your own ideas to tell your version of the story. It must have 250 words at least.

4. Prepare an oral report about it to be presented in the tutorial sessions (from October 20th to 24th), you just will have 2 1/2 minutes and it is expected you to say 45 sentences at least.

4. Language use / writing aspects:

- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide (The ones worked in last classes).
- Useful vocabulary you need to express your ideas.
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.


All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!

27 comments:

  1. Hi! I hope you are doing fine! This is my version about the video.


    A UNFORTUNATE GIRL CALLED LINA
    Lina was a strange girl, she was 30, she was isolated from the other person and grew up with his foster parents, who mistreated her, and certainly grew traumatized and suffered many disappointments in love, she hoped to one day meet a good man, that will change your life, but he did not come, so she came up with a plan to try to catch a man, she thought she would make using the compassion of men. She climbed a very tall building, in order to simulate to be launched into space from the top floor.

    Suddenly, a man named John was walking in front of the building where Lina was, and she was watching him from above, so she decided to launch her shoe to draw the attention of John, then seeing the shoe fell, Jhon raised his eyes and watched Lina, so she hurried up the stairs, finally he get to the roof, and persuaded Lina to not be launched, he help her down, and ask some coffee to try to reassure her, then, they were talking on a moment, and Lina was suggested to John, he was attracted to Lina, not for love but for pleasure, so he followed suit to try to get her into bed, and achievement.

    Lina was happy because she thought he had found her perfect man, but John did not have good intentions with her, spent the day, which he enjoyed having sex with Lina, but once he got bored of her, decided to tell her the truth, he counted her really did not want her, and he was going to leave her, Lina was heartbroken to hear this, and spent several depressed and destroyed within days, so in an irrational and desperate act, a terrible night decided to raise again the roof of the building, but this time it was launched in earnest, and ended in the middle of the street with his body completely undone. End

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  2. Hello! This is my new version about the video.

    ALWAYS TOGETHER

    Michelle had a handsome husband his name was Bob. They were a very happy couple, and they were together all the time. One day, they decided to go to an amusement park, so Bob decided to ride in the roller coaster but Michelle did not ride because she was afraid of heights. Then, Michel decided to wait for Bob near the roller coaster. Suddenly, Michelle heard a loud noise. Immediately, she saw that the roller coaster had fallen. She was very worried, so she decided to search for Bob but she did not find him because it was a terrible accident. All passengers on the roller coaster died that day. Michelle was very sad for her husband. On the third day, she went to him funeral.

    For a long time she had to go to a psychologist because she was very sad and depressed about the accident of her husband. Moreover, she had to go to the doctor because she was very sick too. Immediately, the doctor told Michael that she was pregnant, but she did not want a child because she only thought of bob. She was always sick, so she lost her baby. The news was terrible for her.

    When Michelle saw that she had lost her husband and her son. She went crazy, and her mother decided to take her to a nursing home because she was very sick. After time, Michelle escaped from the Nursing home, and she decided to go to the amusement park where her husband had died. After she lost her fear of heights, and she decided to ride the roller coaster. Then, she threw her clothes to the people who were near the roller coaster. Later she decided to jump out of the roller coaster because she felt alone, and Michael just wanted to be with her husband and her baby again. End

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  3. Lucía Rincón17 May 2015 at 21:33

    WAITING FOR A MIRACLE

    This is a story of a pretty girl who believed in perfect love and Prince Charming. She has blond hair and beautiful blue eyes. But she is not a princess. She is just a woman who grew up in luxury; her parents always gave her what she wanted. She likes fairy tales, especially those who have happy endings. She is Lorraine and she has a great dream, she wants to find the love of his life and be happy forever. The most important thing for her is to marry as soon as possible.

    Time went by. She was still single when she celebrated her 25th birthday. It was the day when she met a boy, his name was Frank. She immediately fell in love. Some months after, Lorraine and Frank decided to marry. This was the most spectacular wedding ever seen before. Lorraine was very happy because finally her dream had come true. But her happiness did not last long, because the same day, she discovered that her husband was gay and he was cheating on with his best man.

    After that, Lorraine was devastated by what she had seen. Because of that, she decided to end her life so she went up to the last floor of the building to jump from there. But accidentally, she stumbled and lost one of her shoes which hit a man who was walking down the street. Then, Lorraine went to see if he was okay. She told him what had happened, that man persuaded her to continue with her life. She asked him to be her husband, but he could not because he was already married. Since then, Lorraine goes up to the last floor of the building to drop a shoe, and in this way she could find a man to be happy for the rest of her life.

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  4. Hi, this is my new version about the video.

    The terrible obsession of love .

    My history is about a girl named Lissa, she was a young and crazy girl,she was 20 years old, but she was a person who always was sad, unhappy , lonely, melancholy. She only lived with her husband in new york . But her husband died some years ago. Beacuse of that the life of that crazy girl change completely .

    For this reason, she decided to come to live in Colombia with her best friend his name was jhon, who was a very attractive and cute man , he lived in Bucaramanga. they lived and worked both, and shared somethings. They were very happy. But weeks later, all was well, until she started to realize that she was in love of her best friend, but, She waited a little time to say it. Because that was a difficult situation. She never thought fall in love for her best friend.

    Howewer ,She decided to tell him, but unfortunately her best friend did not believe that, he thought that lissa was crazy and he decided to leave her alone, because That could not be possible he only wanted her as a friend, she inmediately began to cry and run She said that not wanted to stay single for the rest of her life that She preferred to die suddenly, She decided to go up to the fifth floor of a building and she started to throw all her clothes, but in that moment arrived a kind man who stopped it . Finally they decided to live together and be happy for all their live.

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  5. “Love at first sight”

    Once upon a time a beautiful girl called Sophie that lived with her parents and older brother in “Happy City” . Usually, they went out to catch fish near river. One morning suddenly her brother disappeared and they began to look for him but unfortunately they did not find him. They were loved too much and made everything together. Their parents were too sad that died for him absent. Sophie was felt alone, thought that anyone loved her and her life did not have sense.

    Afterwards, Sophie was too depressed and decided commit suicide, she went “Welcome to happiness” tower and went to rooftop for doing it. In that moment, an old friend of them called Peter, saw her and stop her. She told him what happened and he consoled her. Then, he remembered his wife was very sick and he had to bring her medicines. He said to Sophie that, but she was opposed because she did not want to be alone again. Later, he cried her and ran as fast as he could for his home. While, Sophie thought that there was not anyone for fulling her empty and she went again to the tower.

    Later, Peter brought the medicines to his wife and he told her what had happened. At his home was his brother in law Francisco who listened it and decided to go to seek her. He did not know her but he asked a photo about her to Peter. Peter showed him a photo when they were children and immediately his brother in law went to look for her but he could not found her. Fortunately, when Sophie was ready for throwing, she dropped her shoe and he could see her. He ran as fast as he could and stopped her. She hugged him and he said her that do not will worry. When he saw her beauty and she saw his sympathy, they fell in love. Finally, they were married and lived very happy forever.

    This is a story of love. Actually it was a "Love at first sight". Who could believe this?.

    Thank you very much.

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  6. Hi, this is my new version about the video.

    CAROL’S HISTORY


    Carol was a little girl who was abandoned in an orphanage by her parents, when she was 9 years old in very remote village.Carol grew up in the orphanage always alone, because she was very difficult to relate to other children in the orphanage. Children always invited to her to play with them but she does not like and then she locked herself in her bedroom.However, Carol was always excelled in her studies and she has the best grades in all subjects in school at the orphanage, for that reason Carol received a scholarship from the government of the people, to study at the University. So that Carol then fulfilled his 18 years old, she was sent to the big city to study.

    In the first weeks of their stay in the city. Carol was assigned a colleague to present a very important project. This girl was the same age as Carol and shared with her the love of reading, her name was George.Carol fell in love with George, because he was intelligence and he was so kind to her. One day Carol proposed his love for George, but he the rejected to her, because he already had a girlfriend and they were getting married. Carol upon hearing this, she ran desperately to a very high building, she was ready to end his life, but suddenly to Carol dropped it a shoe, and at that moment a young man crossed the street, the young look whence came the shoe and he saw to Carol at the top of the building.So he ran to prevent her launch, Carol to see the concern of the young for her, fell in love with the young, so she decided to take her hand and go for a coffee with him.

    Carol was happy because she thought the girl would stay with her forever. But the young man after seeing Carol was better, decided to say goodbye to her, but Carol rushed to hug and she would not let go, the boy was frightened, he pushed Carol and went jogging. Then Carol return back to the building.So she waited to cross any man to throw his shoe at them, so they are well cared for it and feel loved. Carol did this for several days.One morning George crossed the street and saw Carol at the top of the building, immediately he ran to save her. Carol saw George, run and care for her, so she was very happy because she thought George would return to be with her.While George ascended the stairs very labored, Carol jump of happiness, and then she inadvertently lost his balance your body, slipping and falling from the top of the building.

    The end.

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  8. A SECOND OF LIFE
    Andrew is the drummer of famous band in New York. In the band there are four person. They are Hudson, Heike and Rosse. They are fantastic group. Rosse is a beautiful woman. She is a singer of band, she is fallen love whit Andrew, but he does not want to engage anyone. Andrew is younger with big purposes for the life but he has a big secret. He wants to travel around the word. He wishes that people meet his group band and his music. Rosse and Andrew are very friends, they enjoy a lot of time with the instruments and the music.
    Andrew has been planning a new trip to European since tree months. It was a surprise for the band. He decided tell them about trip. this day at night, they went to celebrate to Rosse`s house and she tell Andrew that she was fallen in love with him. He looks like very surprise for the news. Suddenly he cucked it the Rosse´s house. She preoccupied tell to Hudson and Heike, they quickly went to look for him.
    Andrew was crying in a park away of city. His friends did not looked him that night so that they went to sleep. Andrew had lot of time and he thought that owe tell to his friends the truth. The next day Andrew back to Rosse´s house, he called his friends and drum up them. He told them that only reason of trip were for his health. He had a little days of lifetime. His friend to know the truth decided to finish the group band. Hudson and Heike very sad leave behind the band. Rosse shared with Andrew the latter days. When he died, Rosse very sad, she climbed a building, fell down her shoe and she slipped and died too.

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  9. A Remembrance of “The Circular Ruins”


    A man had a great desire: he wanted to make a human by means of his dreams. He dreamed the heart, the skin, the hands and the other organs of his dreamt creature. It was created but only was sleeping, he did not have life. Then, the dreamer prayed to the god of the fire life for the dreamt man. The god helped him and the other lived; but there was a condition: the new human would be adapted to some strange relation with the fire; he never would be burned when fire would touch him.

    The two men were a kind of priests who preached in different temples. When the dreamer knew that “his son” was in the temple of the ruins touching fire without being burnt, he went there being afraid of that the other would discover that was a not a normal human, that he was an invention, a creation, a dream. When he arrived to the other temple a wave of fire attacked him. He believed that he was going to die, but fire touched him and he was not affected by its power. He realized that he was too an invention, a creation, a dream.

    Who did dream to the dreamer? Who was dreamed by the dreamt man? Who is dreaming us? This game of eternal dreamers and dreamt men, created by the great Borges, is circular, infinite like the woman crying, the man arriving, the shoe falling, the woman crying, the man arriving, the shoe falling, the woman crying, the man arriving, the shoe falling, the woman…



    José Inocencio Becerra Lagos

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  10. UNEXPECTED NOTICE

    Day begins with problems, his wife is fire from the job, it must the rent on the flat and she fits of anger. While he was thinking in his problems a shoe felt in front of him .He got confused and looked up where a girl was on the building roof top. Look like if she wanted to commit suicide, so he ran fast for saving the girl.

    On the rooftop the girl was waiting to jump from there, when he arrived and rescued her. He had saved her from the death. She smiled and they went to eat something, so, there they turned up. His name was Nathan and her name was Julia.

    She was crying, she said him she was crazy and that was her main problem, she had escaped from the asylum a few moments before, she said she had been looking for her ex-husband. Nathan thought – What I did?-. So he got up from the table and just went he wanted to leave her, she tried to kiss him.

    He showed his wedding ring and went out, but he did not notice Julia was chasing him when, in an alley she surprised him. He got angry and he pushed her.

    Julia just returned so fast and climbed the building again, came to the rooftop and left down a shoe in front of a boy who was on the street; she was crying, the boy climbed but when he arrived to the rooftop she jumped. Julia had died and Nathan realized when he read the newspaper, “A woman with mental problems, who killed her husband committed suicide”. He was surprised.

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  11. The stupid man

    One, two, three steps to the front. The toes of their feet are drift on wind, whereas their heels are seized to the surface. She closes her eyes, because, she wants to remember something, but your mind is in white, for that reason, she thinks that, maybe, she does not have past. The wind strikes her face, and she comes down to back. But, she stands up, and she walks, one, two steps to the front. She closes her eyes and she tries to remember her past, but her mind is in white; so, suddenly, she throws her shoe.

    A man walks in a cold day; his hands are in his pockets, his eyes look toward the floor. He remember his past, but he does not want to think about his future, he believes that his life is sad; But, suddenly he feels a shoe in his head, he looks to up, and his eyes are cross with the woman´s eyes. She wants to jump to the space, so, he runs to the top of the building. The man runs faster, because he wants to avoid that the woman comes down, he wants to do something for someone, for that reason he runs.

    -She can not come down, I can save her and of this way, my life can have sense- he thinks while climbing the stairs. When he arrives to the roof of building, he shouts her: ¡stooopp, please! ¡You should not do it!, and the woman turn her face with tears in her eyes. When she sees to him, she smile, and she thinks: “my prince came to the rescue”, and she opens her arms. But a strong wind strikes her and she come down to the space, the man run and jump behind her. The man jumped of a sanatorium building, for an insane woman that, besides, she had a parachute. A stupid man less, she thought, without to know that he was her brother.

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  13. Mad love

    This story began with a discussion betwen a woman and her boyfriend, because he failed her. They had a kind and long relationship, or she believed that as soon as the relationship started. She always thought that he was the perfect man although his faults. He was an imperfect man for everybody but a perfect man for her.

    For some days she discovered that he everyday told her only lies. She was shocked and confused for that. She had to open her eyes because she had been living with a band in front of herself. He destroyed her world, her dreams, ilusions and her heart, so she had created a world with him but that was not important for him.

    He had thought that he had herself in his hands and could break her heart when he wanted to do that. But the day when he failed her with another woman, she cut their relationship because with that, he destroyed her like nobody had done.

    She was insane for that moment, then she promised herself that he would never return to her life. After, she went out of his life and tried to find an end for that sad feeling. Her madness was killing her and she wanted to stop that. Then she reflected about her life and told herself that she had to search someone who could remove her madness with a real love.

    She did not have the better way for doing that, because she tried to find love with married men, to search kiss and hugs in different bodies. Eventhough she did not find her true love, she always was certain of one day someone might come and would give her the kisses, hugs and the real love that she never had felt. If that was imposible, she believed that someone might begin a mad life like her mad life to love her.

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  16. THE SHOES OBSESSION


    This history is about a woman called Annie, she was twenty-one years old, she was beauty and friendly, she was in a relationship, her boyfriend was called Petter and also he was twenty-one years old. They had begun to live together, due to they were in a good time in their relation, they love each other very much and their understood. One day in summer they received an unexpected invitation to an important party.


    Annie was very emotional with the idea of party, then she tell to him the wish by a new dress and new shoes, but her boyfriend had not the sufficient money to buy all, so he only bought the dress, however Annie was unhappy with that and star to cry. Before days she had visited shoes store in a mall, it was amazing but also the shoes was very expensive, she think to herself she will have the shoes over anything. According to that she made a plan, she went to a balcony and threatened to her boyfriend with fall of there and throw her old shoe to the street. Petter was worried by her, then run to save her, they walk and kept calm in that time, he wanted sort the disagreement out between themselves, and even so after a moment she continued with her idea and tried to persuade him of buy the shoes and eventually began a new discussion.


    Petter was tired and bored with his situation, he believed she was crazy, so he leave her and their relation. Annie called to her old boyfriend, Max, who believed that she could end her life, and he bought shoes to her each time she want it. They began a romance and she was happy.

    The end.

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  17. A pretty history
    Once upon a time a girl, who lived in California, her name was Mari, she was 28 years and she was very happy with her partner lived. His name was camel. She was two years living together; everything was so beautiful because they were going to marry. Until one day he was unfaithful to her with her best friend did she learned by others and not by them, what genre in despair, she said, all went away live feel the single were lies. She was very sad and depressed she cried and cried
    She called her friends, but they left alone, she thought, what do I do? She was close to a building first was thinking of committing suicide, but she remembered that no, that she had a family, she thought it, a plan, pretend that it is suicide so getting one quotation, passage near a man who saw pass a shoe and wonder where came and saw the girl up on the top floor and ran to help her achieve reassure her went to a coffee.
    When they left the coffee, she hugged to him it and tried to kiss him but him elusive it. He said that he is a married man. He went on his way, but she did not understand and was still there insisting you until he was furious and told him leave me alone.
    He said. To understand. I am a married man. He finally retired, and she returned to do the same, another man appeared and gave confidence to her and she told him that it was very nice to make that, continued talking, later they were married.

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  18. THE LOVE HATES HER

    This is the story about a beautiful girl, called Kate. She lived with her ex-boyfriend, and she was happy. But one day she found her boyfriend kissing another woman, she started to cry and she ran as fast as she could, she tried to forget him consuming alcohol and drugs.

    Some weeks later, she began to come out to the Park, but this make that she feels very bad since that she always saw different couples giving hugs and kisses, one day she was very depressed, and she went to a building (a very big building), and She thought to jumped, but suddenly she repented, she tried and tried, but she could not do it, in her last attempt she lost a shoe, and a man found it, he looked up and saw that Kate was in the more height of the building. He ran very fast, and he ‘’saved’’ her, after they went to drink a coffee in the Kate’s house, time later they were quiet until that Kate try to kiss him. But he had a problem; he was married, after he went out to the Kate’s house and she followed him. He started to get angry with her, because she would not let him in peace; she stopped until the man hiding of her. She thought that the love hates her.

    One week later she came back to the building, and she threw the shoe as a strategy to find the true love until the day that a man fell into her trap, and she died alone in her house.

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  20. Gary was that kind of boy who likes go out with friends, go to parties and meet beautiful girls, but he really never cares about anyone else than himself. Once he was in a famous girl’s party and he looked at her as a price, an award to get. As always he does not think in her feelings but this girl was special, her name was Hirajo that means justice in Yoruba language.

    Gary despised Hirajo after they had sex. She was so angry and she felt so filthy that she wanted to give a punishment to Gary. She swore that he will be sentenced to live just with the love of crazy girls. He did not believe it and he carried on his life as always.

    He did not realize but he started to act like a crazy one as all the girls whom he had been in love. A sunny day he was walking around the city and he met a new girl, he knew that she will be as mad as other, so he pretended to be married, he was afraid because he saw in her eyes something different but he continued running away.

    He felt weird and wanted to see her again. After looking for her along days and weeks he found her on a building top, she wanted to jump and kill herself. He tried to stop her but when he was climbing the stairs a scream was heard. Gary was sure that it was the end. He opened the door, look at her and smile, she smiled back.

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  21. NEEDING LOVE
    A woman was tired to feel so alone, and she thought that she had to do something for finding a man who loved her. But she wanted to know a man in a crazy way. So she went to the top of a building and she waited there until a man walked on the side, then she saw a man, and she threw one of her sneakers to him and he looked up and ran fast towards her, because he thought that she wanted to throw herself. The man arrived close her, and he asked her that would come whit him. She smiled him and they went to a restaurant to drink a coffee.
    The woman was very happy because she believed that this man was the person that she had been looking for. But the man just thought that he had saved a life. Then, the woman tried to kiss the man, but he did not let it, because he was married. The man left her and he walked, but he realized that the woman was walking behind him. So the man told her that he did not love her, but she did not understand, the man had to talk her very hard. Finally the woman understood and she came back to the building and waited for a new man.
    This woman had a wrong thought, because the strategy that she used did not show that she wanted a man who loved her, her strategy showed that she needed help or somebody that could save her. She tried to escape of the loneliness, but the way she acted did not the correct, because she really was alone.
    Made by Erika Rozo.

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  23. There was a rare woman, her name was Mary Bell but everyone called her Bloody Mary. That girl did not live in a usual house or in a common flat. Really she was confined in a mental institution because she had done something very wicked. Somebody said that she had killed to his husband other said that she had killed to her son. I did not know certainly what she had done what I just can say is… that when that girl came to my life, everything changed.

    One day I had to go to work, I was late;. When something made me to stop. A shoe was falling from balcony, suddenly I went quickly, I saw her. She went to jump, she had a lost glance she looked sad and then I decided to take a coffee with her, in that moment my work did not matter. What I did, was that we started to talk about irrelevant topics absolutely nothing about commit suicide. I paid the account and I said her good bye. Then, that girl started to follow me to wherever place I went.

    In a couple of days I was so scary because I saw her in front of my office , in front of my house , but when I tried to notice to people they said me that they did not see anything they started to avoid me and it was affecting my marriage, social life and my work. One day I was brushing my teeth and I saw her, I shouted and my wife said… ¡you must go to psychologist I cannot bear you! .Finally I went to the mental institution and when I was inside, doctors had a big smiles in their faces and they said ¡ hey here you are!
    -We were waiting you—
    You must be the imagined Bloody Mary’s husband-. They laughed when told that. I fell in a complete and utter confusion-
    Doctor said: - you are mad, Bloody Mary does not exist and did not exist, it is just an illusion.
    Every day I woke up and I do not know who I am I just know that time is coming to the end and Bloody Mary is still watching me… I just can say you that when you are on the street do not take into account some smelly shoe… probably it is her.

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  24. A pure love.

    This is a great story of a magical love, it is interesting what is in the story, it costs nothing to dream, think that those who dare to create another world out of the ordinary ...

    There was a time a couple of guys who were saddened by the lives they led, they felt they were not included, thought it was better to live in another world where injustices existed and could not be happier, had in common a love for paintings and there reflected their dreams, though they lived far apart, did not know each ...

    Suddenly one day a group of friends she made a camp, they invited many friends. in this camp he met the boy who thought like her, it was love at first sight; They talked for a long time, they were best friends.

    Time after they got engaged, they did everything together and their love was so pure that no fighting and decided to get married and be happy, were on honeymoon at Niagara Falls, and when they were there, went to visit the place and keep memories, although not everything was rosy because when they were taking pictures a strong breeze and he fell to the bottom of the waterfall, where he died.

    After the funeral, Lisa returned to her unhappiness, she felt incomplete and decided to go in search of his love, so was those falls where months ago had lost his love and decided to jump into the void, because he believed so would join his love.


    After this situation, the world was ever the same, it was because she and found, but it was amazing what had painted on his underworld was in this new world, full of colors, where there were no tears, only smiles and good times, created a world where they were happy, their souls were the leaders of this great planet.

    Finally they sent postcards to earth to be happy inviting those who identified with their world, which was enough to reach the just dreaming!

    End.

    Thank you.

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  25. Kate

    How many time do I need to be haappy? It was asked Kate frecuentely. She was a beatiful girl but she had an accident. So, every single day she was doing the same, looking for a man, a handsome man that could be her happiness.



    Kate was 28 years, she was lived with her mom since she was born in a small town but when grew, Kate got out and arrived in the Capital. However, she didnt know the city. So, one day, a motorbike crush her and she had a problem with her brain because when the accident happened, she thump hardly her head.


    After, Kate wokes up different without her memory, as with amnesia. From accident, hauntingly she has been looking for a man because she thinks that with him she was being happy.


    The time passed and she couldnt found her love, unfourtunality she was hoping dead, everybody kwnown that she was like crazy and no one wanted to relationship with her, perhabs they were scaried.

    Right now, she is know like "The Capital's Crazy"

    The end?

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  26. Kate

    How many time do I need to be haappy? It was asked Kate frecuentely. She was a beatiful girl but she had an accident. So, every single day she was doing the same, looking for a man, a handsome man that could be her happiness.



    Kate was 28 years, she was lived with her mom since she was born in a small town but when grew, Kate got out and arrived in the Capital. However, she didnt know the city. So, one day, a motorbike crush her and she had a problem with her brain because when the accident happened, she thump hardly her head.


    After, Kate wokes up different without her memory, as with amnesia. From accident, hauntingly she has been looking for a man because she thinks that with him she was being happy.


    The time passed and she couldnt found her love, unfourtunality she was hoping dead, everybody kwnown that she was like crazy and no one wanted to relationship with her, perhabs they were scaried.

    Right now, she is know like "The Capital's Crazy"

    The end?

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  27. I am waiting for someone find my shoe.

    My name is Luisa, I am a tall girl, short hair, I am 35 years old, and in this time I feel that the train is leaving me, the love train. All my life I had been waiting to find someone perfect for me, of course I mean a man, and not any man, I think that in this I not mistaken, that all women like me, we are looking by our blue Prince, tall, attractive, affectionate, in summary a perfect man. But fate was always against me, therefore I decided choose a man and not waiting for that he choose me.

    And in the love I has gone very wrong, you can say I'm not the kind of girl who is very lucky with men, because I need things that other girls have, attractive to many, a slender body, long hair, long legs, flawless complexion, anyway. Although I know I have my things in the background, it has not helped me to find my soulmate and to be a stable partner; to not give more details, I will tell you the desperate decision that I took.

    And it is at this point that my shoe goes to help me, to make a trap to the love. I know it sounds crazy, but my shoe will help me,you not imagine ¿how ?, is very easy, the strategy is to let "forgotten" my shoe somewhere, though without forgetting leave a piece of paper in my shoe, with my telephone number, keeping the hope that somewhere in this world my "great love" is waiting for me, I just think somehow help to make their task easier.

    Thank you.

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